Anakin_Lost

I liked the premise of multiple systems but the grammar couldn't get me past chapter 4. it's bad, even for this app.

I prefer murder mysteries. they're just so..... mysterious, ya know?

i have questions about the synopsis. so he falls asleep in his world, wakes up in another, uses an ability,dies, then goes to a 3rd world?

at some point is he just a bad lord 😂 like no one else has mentioned having a hard time managing their domain

ohhh so he's stupid for plot convenience. it's like having a story labeled "My Idle Money generating system" only for the MC to work for 50 years because he hasn't gotten his money to a point where the system could be idle.

it's decent for a solo leveling knock off. Guy is trash, gets a system, gets a random dungeon instance, forges first dagger.... all of that is fine because solo leveling works for a reason. the real complaint is that the system is insufferable and the MC is just stupid. the system is supposed to be an idle system but says if the MC is idle, he's gonna lose his Johnson. then comes the stellar MC. has an affection meter for some of the girls in his life, it's broken down by ranges, but still doesn't do anything with it.

the lies. this number is way too high

what's "haiz"?