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Alex_789212dBalas RakheidNo it doesn't. I have never once seen any author make corrections on ANY novel pointed out by their audience. I assume at this point once an author uploads a chapter they have to re-upload with the appropriate corrections.
Zhou Xue came over to examine his body and asked with a smile, "How strong is Li Hongshuang? Fighting her should have broadened your horizons."- Alex_789213dBerkomentarSubsequently, the three nascent souls exploded without leaving traces behind.
- Alex_789214dBerkomentarNow, two of his most hated enemies had something to do with his clan.
- Alex_789215dBerkomentar
No No please no tourney arc it's almost as bad as the academy arcs
"What I just said was only for Zizhu prefecture. Zizhu is under the 36th state. Do you know how many prefectures under the 36th state? 18. Do you now understand how terrifying and deadly this tournament is?" - Alex_789215dBerkomentar"You attack us. We will kill you. Kill all your clans and families. Kill all your friends. And kill all your animals. Your corpses will be fed to dogs. Your family name will be erased from the city register and from the minds of everyone who knows of your existence."
- Alex_789216dBerkomentar"Find that race," their command echoed, "and exterminate them."
- Alex_789217dBalas Memento_mori
It's confusing because author forgot to add shadow/second/servant whatever it's called after Magnus's Ravenblade's.
"Master Magnus, if I may be so presumptuous," the man, Vector, spoke. If Atticus had been there, he would instantly recognize Vector. He was Magnus's Ravenblade that Atticus had seen the first time he met Magnus when he was seven. - Alex_789221dBerkomentar
Confused here. It said it can duplicate civilization items yet the alloy equipment manufacturer isn't a civilization item. He got it from the bucket after killing the disaster level witch.
After discussing the chivalrous way of the Teutonic Knights with Joan, Noah left the True God Sect satisfied and returned to the Changsheng Adventure Group's base. He duplicated an 'Alloy Equipment Manufacturer' immediately. - Alex_789222dBerkomentar
These dudes lost 21 people two of which were peak Qi gathering were bound to die of old age anyway. Let's be honest the gains far outweigh the losses.
After this battle, the Lin Family's vitality was greatly damaged, and for the next few years, we would face a shortage of personnel. - Alex_789223dBalas Rebeccah_Herdener
This is a really garbage chapter and something I've noticed with this novel is the author does random time skips and fails to give any indication. Like you mentioned with the women in the room. No clue whether they're still in the room or not. Author is also super inconsistent with the information. However regarding the incident about the shower I think that's due to her:
He let the shower water wash over himself. - Alex_789223dBerkomentar
What he needs to do is strip his ability and let him taste his own ability
"If you know what's good for you, tell me where your adventurer team's base is, how many supplies you have, how many awakened beings there are, spill it all. Otherwise, you'll wish you could die, ever tasted the flavor of an S-class ability poison?" - Alex_789225dBerkomentar
This supposed to be Super Energy from the half human/zombie?
- Super Charge S - Alex_789227dBalas Taro
lol I thought the same had to look up a "watermelon knife" and they actually look like a mini machete.
With those words, he stepped back and swung his knife. A head rolled off. Flicking off the blood stains on his clothes, he casually lit a cigarette and continued to lean against the railing, waiting for the apocalypse to arrive. Having just killed someone, even his own girlfriend, Noah felt not the slightest ripple in his heart, as if the cold body on the ground had nothing to do with him, maintaining a lazy, indifferent demeanor. It was only a slight sense of enlightenment that touched him. - Alex_789227dBalas PeterPan
I'll check it out
For those part not coming forth on their own, Han Li could use means to intimidate or force marriages. Thus, The Li Manor could increase its population rapidly, and Han Li's number of descendants and those with naturally high talents would quickly grow.detailLongevity Clan Starts with the Patriarch's MarriageFantasi Timur · Ride the wind while it's weak - Alex_789227dBerkomentar
It sounds like the pill now automatically enhances talent to the 5th grade. Whereas before it was only enhanced talent by one grade.
Han Yongfan, Han Yongli, Han Yongjin, and other descendants, originally lacking in aptitude but possessing either ability or insight, now had their aptitudes enhanced. Looking forward to the future, their confidence soared, believing they would make significant achievements and would then return the family's nurturing in full.detailLongevity Clan Starts with the Patriarch's MarriageFantasi Timur · Ride the wind while it's weak - Alex_789227dBalas PeterPan
Yes hope your novel is doing well.
For those part not coming forth on their own, Han Li could use means to intimidate or force marriages. Thus, The Li Manor could increase its population rapidly, and Han Li's number of descendants and those with naturally high talents would quickly grow.detailLongevity Clan Starts with the Patriarch's MarriageFantasi Timur · Ride the wind while it's weak - Alex_789228dBalas Akailvi99
You seem to have forgotten what his system does.
For those part not coming forth on their own, Han Li could use means to intimidate or force marriages. Thus, The Li Manor could increase its population rapidly, and Han Li's number of descendants and those with naturally high talents would quickly grow.detailLongevity Clan Starts with the Patriarch's MarriageFantasi Timur · Ride the wind while it's weak - Alex_789229dBerkomentar
Might as well tell them that he reincarnated as well.
Seeing no change in her expression, Elijah looked a bit disappointed. Then he took out a police water bottle from the side pocket of his backpack and pointed to the zombie grass inside. - Alex_789229dBerkomentar
Nice and efficient. No staring at the guy for 20 minutes and having him wake up and a struggle ensues.
Elijah approached, grasped the man's head with both hands, and twisted it forcefully. - Alex_789230dBerkomentar
After giving his blood is the control permanent or does he have to periodically give them more blood to maintain control?
With one hand controlling the door, Elijah flicked a drop of blood into the zombie dog's mouth.