Kidnapping comes later. I'm on a break right now, because I stumbled upon a great novel. And apparently, I can only write at peak efficiency when: 1) I'm reading trash (Good novels are too distracting for me to get creative) 2) I'm well rested 3) I eat healthy I already addressed point 2 and 3, but I can't do anything about point 1 for now. I'm hooked. And now I need to finish the novel asap to get back to writing.

The MC is a space monkey. And his temper is better than mine.🙈

Dragon Ball is just crazy like that. Frieza was 7 when he destroyed Planet Vegeta. Turbo is a floating human toddler with super intelligence. And Bulma is just pretty pretty smart. Some kids in Asia learn how to write at age 3. A Super-Genius in Dragon Ball should be better than that.

I guess you refer to Bulma's actions that don't correlate with her perceived intelligence in the Anime. Well, there's being book-smart, and street-smart. You can be an ace academically, but still mess up when it comes to real life. Take Sheldon from 'The Big Bang Theory', or any of the other nerds. Despite being pretty smart, they're way more socially awkward and more of a mess around other people than Bulma. Bulma is just the kind of person that excels in private, but becomes less capable when someone looks over her shoulder.

I've got 28° in my room. I feel like steamed hams right now.

That's a good question. I started this as a joke to make writing easier. But then I realized its potential for the plot.. I plan on revealing, and fixing the trauma relatively soon. Because even the best joke gets old if used too much. After fixing it, I might refer to it again as an insider joke though. If you're curious about it, you might want to read chapter 1 (the auxiliary chapter) I made it an auxiliary chapter, because it's not THAT important to the story / a big spoiler. Furthermore, I will mention it again at the big reveal.

I could only now see the wisdom in this. Thanks.

"Stealing one's Fate" You won't find it for now. Maybe it will become visible once I upload more chapters.

I have plans about Tien Shinhan...

Both. The Capsule Corp needs Dr. Brief well and happy to make new innovations. There's a big plothole in Dragon Ball, about Dr. Brief being a genius airhead, while running the biggest company with zero effort. In real life, greedy committee members etc. would've plotted to take over the company for more money. I just gave a few selfish reasons for the company's "greedy merchants"/"loan sharks" to arrange for Dr. Brief's happiness. And an example for why they can't even cut down on Dr. Brief's finances more than they should.

That's a good argument. But we all know Earth is a really small planet with little gravity, right? And the moon is even smaller. Let's just agree on the moon being very small. And it only looks normal, because it's very close to Earth. Close enough to scrape the atmosphere.

Thanks. Kinda ironic I got spotted writing Fanfiction though ; )

I won't. It's not necessary after all. He also won't just start ranting about his previous life to them. You also don't talk about every little thing with your friends. Rather, have fun in the present.

What do you mean? You need to give me an example. I can't work with vague advice.

Maybe I'll look it over again at a later date. But since the title of the chapter is "Feverdream", you have to deal with some confusion. I'm thinking about skipping the first few chapters entirely. Have the story start at chapter 3, 4, 5 or something. But I can't do that right now for a few reasons.

Don't worry, I already got something for the action. Making it more realistic? The story is getting more realistic every chapter. Wdym?

Why not? Rather than carry the truth around for no reason at all, just spit it out when it does the least amount of damage. The people around him are good people. He knows how they'll react. And being reincarnated allows him to be treated like an adult by Master Roshi. Bulma is a kid, and doesn't discriminate. Rather, you write heavy information like that in your introduction, than make others suspicious.

That's true. But Roshi destroyed the moon before the King Piccolo arc. So people apparently get to destroy moons when the Power Level hits 180.

Oh. My bad! The green lanterns stand for 'willpower'. Thanks for pointing it out!

honestly, he doesn't even think about the possibility of being reincarnated as a girl.