ScorpianRed

honor*?

Personally, I don't like doing this, but come on, the main character is completely illogical, despite a little change, it's still something that's unbearable. Come on, I didn't see anyone talking, so basically the guy became an orphan at 8 years old, and his sister managed to support him without him having many difficulties, so far so good, however, his mentality is that of a 13-year-old, no matter how antisocial he is, it doesn't justify the way he is, if he had a mental problem it would be different. His sister is an angel, if she were the main character she would be a super person, she can support the house, give her brother an allowance, clean the house and make food, i this in a job without a degree working in the daytime To get an idea of how detestable the MC is, if you put a Chinese young master and the MC side by side, 8 out of 10 people would choose the young master. But it's not all bad, the idea is interesting, you don't find writing errors all the time, the system could be better built but it's not bad, the consistency of the novel is good, well, unless involving the mc

It's not bad, just some structures that look weird

It looks like a lot of response from the gpt chat, while I'm not against it, maybe a change in them could be more interesting, I wasn't going to comment, but since I've already gotten this far

first can is not necessary, or rather, it does not make sense

. ≠ , higher up Those in the middle of the sentence, without need

techer or teacher? the discord link is expired, you have to put it so it doesn't expire

There are several of these throughout, but everything in the same paragraph was very strange, I think the only time it was used correctly was at the beginning, man, creating is hard, but don't give up

Did you mean interface?

If this paragraph is correct, it conflicts with the next paragraph, and it appears that Xin was using the stick