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Wasn't it easier to kill the prince?
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Relleno
YES
It needs improvement; first of all, a secondary character's point of view shouldn't last so long when the reader already knows what is happening, and certainly not entire chapters. For the MC's age, he sometimes feels like a child in some parts, and the story progresses slowly.
No spoile
Seriously? MC is scared of your old boss with the power he has now.
you haven't read much is it?
[img=disgusted][img=disgusted] Get to work