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hman24

hman24

Lv11
2021-08-03 BergabungUnited States
30.3h

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  • hman24
    hman24a year ago
    Diterbitkan

    10 Chapters in, it's a pretty good story with the plot progressing fairly smoothly. The basic premise without containing many spoilers is that our MC is transmigrated into this fantasy world of a novel he read in his past life as a student in the same academy as the MCs of the story. He decides he doesn't want to be involved in the plot and wishes for a "normal" life so he immediately drops out and hides in a tower for 10 years so he is hidden from the world throughout the entire plot of the novel. The story begins with him emerging from the tower after the novel's epilogue and returning to the home of the body he transmigrated into, only to find out the main villainess of the story has taken over his territory under a disguise, since she is hiding from the empire. This is a non-harem story, so I believe this story going forward will mostly be about the main character trying desperately to maintain a "normal" life while managing a relationship with the villainess who wants something from the MC. Though the writing of the author can be a bit awkward to read at times, and there may be some grammatical errors here and there, I get the general ideas of what they are trying to convey. My only real problem with this story has to do with the MC himself. His obsession with normalcy was amusing at first, but it started to become excessive to read and even started to annoy me after a while. I'm confident the author was purposefully doing this to annoy the readers. Even though I know this, it doesn't mean I have to like it. Overall, I'd recommend this novel.

  • hman24
    hman24a year ago
    Berkomentar

    Trust me dude, whatever you have in that mind of yours is 1000x better than whatever AI can come up with lol

  • hman24
    hman24a year ago
    Berkomentar

    The fact they were all so angry only further proved his point lol

  • hman24
    hman24a year ago
    Balas Yajin3004

    Well, it depends on why they betrayed him. For instance, if Lecia betrayed him because of some Yandere jealousy-type nonsense, I wouldn't let that slide.

  • hman24
    hman24a year ago
    Berkomentar

    I'm pretty sure the title of the chapter should be changed from Rachel to Laura, since it seems to be from Laura's POV

  • hman24
    hman242 years ago
    Berkomentar

    Fray's mother can go f*** herself with her kind act nonsense. I personally wouldn't forgive her for giving up on her own son like that.

  • hman24
    hman242 years ago
    Diterbitkan

    This is just a wish fulfillment fanfiction. Even though the concept is unique, I can't stand how the MC who died 9 times can have the mentality of an otaku edgelord who only cares about women. The only way the author could create conflict in this story is by changing the personalities of the Anime Protagonists by saying nonsense like they are a transmigrator or they are a regressor from an alternative timeline. The MC had everything handed to him by his loli system (his looks, his strength), yet acts like he did everything on his own acting like an insufferable narcissist in his head. The MC also said he can't have any male friends because he'd be afraid they might try to steal his girls behind his back. If that's what he believes, that means he's never had any friends before. And also, I don't mind harems, but this shit is trending toward ridiculous. Is he gonna try to seduce every hot woman in the world? There is just so much not to like about this novel, but I still read this trash because nobody else has written a plot this unique.

  • hman24
    hman242 years ago
    Berkomentar

    It would be funny for Han Lingyun to regain his past cultivation without anyone besides Wang Yimo and the elders knowing he ever lost it in the 1st place lol