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Great chapter , however small grammar tip. I notice that you keep omitting (the) in a sentence . Please fix that . It will make your grammer a whole lot better .

Well I don’t mind it, any golden finger would be fine . There so much hate for system. I honestly find them enjoyable if the system is only a status screen that you can add points too.

Sigh , don’t know how I feel .

Sigh , seriously. If the novel is good , you don’t need to do this . 🤷‍♂️

Ehhh, I don’t know how I feel about this . I like the choice system. But was it really smart to bring one piece powers/fruit into the Naruto world as the first reward/gift package . For me personally, I have to look up any one piece info . So that’s a immersive killer. But I’m still willing to read it.

Let me see , wood release or some absurd ability that come in handy at the right time .

That don’t make any sense except he good at finding fakes items . Maybe good analysis details which could help .

Hmm. Depends on the outcome , i may drop it, but so far it’s been great . So don’t let me down .

Way too young to say this even if he a genius , I would say wait until his 6 , that’s when most kids start the academy and graduate by 12 right ? Or something along those lines .