GodKaiser

You're doing fine, don't worry

Well at first but quickly it gets boring, with so many characters from LOL, it was obvious that they were going to overshadow all of Danmachi's characters.

It looks promising, the system a little broken but it's okay.

Tftc

Don't worry, there is a point where the relationships speed up; I only got as far as I could find which was 700 something caps (if anyone knows where to read more, please tell me). I even seem to remember the author apologizing for slowing down the relationships so much.

Cuck.

The MC is a total spineless simp with Utaha when he has Erina and many more, it's the only thing I don't like about the fic, I will never understand the Chinese.

No ironically I like these moments because they show that the MC is not a robot, many Chinese fics always have him be training, match, training, match.

I don't know why I didn't think the MC would go for Nagi's team, they're all absurdly talented, although my favorites are Chigiri and Nagi. If it were up to me, I would have them 2 on the MC team. In this case I lean towards the absolute genius Nagi