Librarian_Heroen

It’s an option, but I think it is too extreme. Chakra is part of this world view in the moment, take it out from everyone is like destroy all their years of hard work and training.

Or maybe something as Hunter x Hunter.

For sure! I didn’t know I needed this!

Seems interesting, but an advice, please, stop talking alone, makes it difficult to be taken serious. And one more thing, you don’t need all these monologues about how he is so obviously bored with his life. You can make it better by just letting some clues for us to find. He could, for some moments look at those clues about the danger in the city, and narrow his eyebrowns or other way of showing and not telling: “Ah, I am concerned about the fact that I am being kept in the dark and heard some crazy shit just now!” Show, don’t tell.

Man, I am felling it since when he reincarnated, but, did you really read or watched douluo?

Too forced. Everything.

Good idea to a story, but things are kinda strange right now. Principally Danzo’s actions and others dialogue.

Thanks~!

How many chapters are there in the raw?

I can see that you really loves Mordred’s character! I read your novels since your dropped one about Mordred in re zero and love your writing, please, continue.