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Yamato , rebellion , jackal , all-black , masamune , master sword , devil sword of sparda , Kusanagi no Tsurugi , Aranrúth , Gúthwinë , Lævateinn , glamdring , samehada , yoru , caster , ryusei , Totsuka blade , Demon Sword Lostvayne , Dragon Slayer ,Chastiefol , punisher , divine axe rhitta
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You can make him develop the breathing technique qnd styles ( demon slayer ) Or take inspiration from : Kenshi ( mortal combat ) he is blind seismic sense from toph (avatar ) Extasensory perception tanjiro's sense of smell ( he could smell emotion and alot of other things) Zeinitsu sense hearing ( he could hear others intention i think) sensitivity to air direction and temperature differentials in his environment If you want to give him powers or develop something i suggest search in the superpowers wiki
You should add mor spice to the story Right now it's like one those story that mc will never suffer just that somebody close to him get hurt and never lose anybody . And you should know that nobody knows that kingpin is wilson fisk , nobody ever saw him And you shouldnt give him something that conflict with marvel's logic like chakra , hamon , mana, jutsu , doujutsu Not ki though , marvel has ki or chi but it's diffrent from dragon ball's ki or you could try to synch them to marvel logic like hamon is mystical energy that you can draw from a dimension
Start a company Become influental Monitor potential villains and heroes Experiment on his genes See if he can have doomsday's powers (cause doomsday was kryptonian ) like what omnitrix do to make ultimate aliens Get rid of dengerous villains (like stryker ) Don't let franklin be born ( reed richards and susan's child ) Make allies And name the company umbrella