WizardReader

I read the story the writings good but i could not understand some choices the MC make. You keep trying to force him in a situation he can avoid. Why would you let him cooperate with the police during the war we know the law enforcement are incompetent and he also brought the girl with who has no help at all. You portrayed him to be intelligent yet he keeps making illogical decsions. This isn't how a smart person thinks at all. Even if he underestimated the decision he still chooses to handle the situation through emotion. Sorry i cant continue reading, despite habving great writing.