LarcsytSalu
when I come across typos or wrong word choice/phrase, I mention it using: "*corrected*" instead of "reg"; *corrected; reg ⏭ corrected My way of assisting non-native English authors sound more fluid
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LarcsytSalu4 days agoBerkomentarSee this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
- LarcsytSalu6 days agoBerkomentar
I think this sentence would sound (flow) more fluidly written as either "…it all felt so surreal." or "…it was all so surreal." instead of "…it was all felt so surreal."
- LarcsytSalu9 days agoBerkomentar
justled » jostled
- LarcsytSalu9 days agoBerkomentar
"…like Meyhymm had said." » "…like Bellamy had said." Considering it wasn't Meyhymm who had used the suppressant earlier but Bellamy
- LarcsytSalu9 days agoBerkomentar
Delcain's thought re: Tristan being able to "talk a man out of wallet and keys", has me wondering when & how often that occurred during the years after they escaped from the facility
- LarcsytSalu9 days agoBerkomentar
loose » lose
- LarcsytSalu9 days agoBerkomentar
extention » extension
- LarcsytSalu9 days agoBerkomentar
dipping » dripping
- LarcsytSalu9 days agoBerkomentar
climed » climbed
- LarcsytSalu10 days agoBerkomentar
departed & left essentially mean the same thing in that sentence, this it's repetitive & unnecessary to use both