I'm just your everyday normal young adult who likes reading cultivation and fantasy novels😋
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Thank you for the chap
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thanks for the new chapters
Thanks😅 I'm sure you'll do exellently if you just keep at it😁
also i hope the romance would be steady but not low burn with the MC and FMC having a meaningful and solid bond but i'll be satisfied with anything as long as it's not a rushed or forced relationship as that would compleatly ruin the romance for me and i'd probably skip those parts compleatly
Writing Quality: I didn't see any mistakes when reading, there might be minor grammatical errors but as i said i did not see any as i was reading so it is unnoticable Story Development: The Story progresses very smoothly in my opinion, no complaints from me😁 Character Development: Character development was very good but as the story is still starting there isn't much depth to the side characters, i hope as the novel progresses they will have a bit more depth Updating Stability: I can not say for certain as i read all 65 available chapters today and have yet to see this novels chapter stability but it said there would be if i remember correctly 17 chp per week so i will give it 5 stars World Background: World background was a little lacking specifically in how the worlds land is divided where there are oceans and such, magic was given quite the bit of attention and so was how the world works but they both still have a ways to go, as the novel progresses i hope we will discover more of this worlds background Personal Note: This Novel is an emerging Gem it has great potential, it has elements such as casual, overpowerd, kingdom building, Slice of life and more, i absolutely loved this novel, i started reading it today and read every available chapter, i can't wait to read more chapters and see what the author has in store for us🤩
Thanks for the chapter, can't wait to read more, you got me hooked🤩
My thoughts exactly🤭