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I am glad you like it! <3

Thank you so much!

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Interesting!! The cover picture is so mesmerizing! I loved the creativity of Author about the world and story, he created! Excellent work. More power to you!

The title and the cover got my eyes on them. Much appealing! I loved the Jody's character. She is goofy.. Haha! Writing quality is also great! Excellent work, Author! <3

Haha! He is ;)

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Perfect start!! I loved reading this story as it was flawless... Writing quality was upto the mark! I am amazed by your way of building curiosity... Good work, Author! Looking forward to read more.. Good luck! <3

Plot is good as the synopsis you wrote, was much intriguing. The start is fresh and light.. Perfect to develop the interest.. Keep writing ... your minor mistakes will resolve on its own.. Good job, Author!

Haha! Thank s alot <3 :') Plus I'll covey your condolences to Aabi.. Haha!

Thank you! Keep reading :') <3

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Well! To be honest, it was the new genre for me and I didn't understand the world background perfectly... Totally new eposure but I would say that that was unique in its on way.. You did a great work but the writing style was not my cup of tea.. Keep writing, Author!

Perfect! INteresting to read this chaotic story. The tension was build very well through the narration. I loved reading it as a game's level. Truly thrilling! Great work, Author.

That was perfect!! Great building of suspense.. I loved reading it thorughly!! Great work, author!

Mesmerizing but words were confusing me at the same time. Haha! But I got the idea of the story! Full of action