GaZe_Zero

Looking forward, he thing I like about your writing is that you use lore and stick close to the story, keep it up

I think this is a great Rwby fic, but the one major issue I have is how ahead Ruby is portrayed. Even if she time traveled back in time by one year, she would just be an average student and not so far ahead, as in the actual show most of her time was spent catching up to current students. Also her combat style being as good as Pyrrha and overpowering Glynda is not possible following the Rwby timeline, and is just narrowly possible if it was volume 9 Ruby. Really author has buffed Ruby up too much, and instead of focusing more on plot and changing stuff through actions, they focus on powering Ruby up enough to deal with it.

Surprised me when my very rare check ups on webnovel led to me finding a favorite fic from another site being posted. One of the only SI/OC She Ra fics, well written, fun, and the gamer system is op but scales with everything else in the story. Good OCs and exploration with world building. Really solid gamer fic, one of like two that I follow.

Hmmm might might, tbh not explored so it’s a possibility

Sry for late update, college and COVID hit at same time, will probably be a few but chap is half done

New chapter soonish

Is it the one Rwby Fic on here? It's great to see a reader of mine! Well, I tend to post on Fanfic Net and Webnovel, but I'm planning on also moving over to Spacebattles. Fanfic has an RWBY fic I plan on updating soon as well

This is great stuff. Yknow it would be cool to see them evolve from Protectors to more like Hunters, almost like from RWBY. It just feels like a better fit. I also hope to see the MC mature and grow wise as time passes, instead of acting super young forever.

Great stuff please keep it up. Also what’s the rest of his powers that he gained? Lastly I feel like there’s some jokes that can be made of him being a literal snowman who’ll melt in the sun now that he’s a vamp.