Thanks for letting me know. It turns out that the mother's name was going to be Olivia in the first instance, but I decided on Barbara, so in some places the name Olivia may have remained.

Don't worry my friend, I like the couple that Angelina and George make in the canon.

Yeah, it's practically the same, but I guess 5 feet 2 inches is better said

hmm thanks for the advice. I will try to do that as much as possible. I only change from time to time to the protagonist's pov so that the reader understands more how he feels from his perspective. But I appreciate the constructive criticism.

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He can swim

This one?

Sparrow/s crew?

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Well, that’s definitely just a theory. They don’t say or imply that in any of the films[img=recommend]

I am planning to start writing again and continue with what was already planned (although my schedule is a bit complicated). I generally have a summary from the beginning to the end of all my stories, but I change several things while writing.

Yes..., sorry I don't update so much but I lack inspiration and motivation to continue the story, last week it was only 800 PS. I will continue the story but when the muse returns.

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En realidad lo que me gusta son los time-travel, no Hermione, ella es solo una agregada por su uso habitual en esta temática cuando se trata de historias de HP. Y tal vez tengas razón, no voy a negarlo, pero siempre busco escribir sobre lo que me inspira de lo contrario no podría hacer historias gratis y me centraría más en ganar plata como la mayoría… De hecho cada día pienso más en hacer eso.

No, I'm going to continue with the story but when I have more inspiration and enthusiasm. There was little support from the readers so I lost interest a bit, but I plan to continue the story.

Thanks 💪🏽💪🏽

Thanks😊💪🏽

Well..., please remember that English is not my first language sorry if I have made a gramatical mistake. From what others told me, my grammar is pretty decent and is readable. The truth is that I liked this idea pretty much. I always liked Neville's character, he was in a way quite authentic and I think many can identify a bit with some aspects of his life and personality. And well, giving a good development to his character to improve even more than what we saw in the movies or books seemed interesting to me, and doing it in a more entertaining and uncommon way also enthused me. I hope you enjoy the story.