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N_Nelson

N_Nelson

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2021-07-07 BergabungGlobal
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson6d
    Balas Vexacion

    there's nothing wrong with that.

    rise of House Baratheon
    Televisi · Kingdom224678
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson9d
    Berkomentar

    why the hell did u give him this, now u just ruined ur fic.

    Ch 32 Awaken Bloodline
    Robert I Baratheon
    Derivasi dari karya · DaoistWDfd8h
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson11d
    Berkomentar

    what if Aerys kills his parents, that might cause him to rebel

    Ch 30 Sailing trip I
    Robert I Baratheon
    Derivasi dari karya · DaoistWDfd8h
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Balas Ppp_Pppp

    ir giving him too much naruto jutsu without correlating it with the jujutsu power system, random cursed techniques don't just pop up with a singular ability

    Ch 32 Fighting Satoru {32}
    The yellow flash of jujutsu high
    Komik · Ppp_Pppp
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Berkomentar

    Dropped. Must every mc be reincarnated by Rias? You just killed ur fic

    Ch 7 Chapter [7]
    DXD: King of fairies
    Komik · Mirko22
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Berkomentar

    just going to say this, it's not possible to do rasengan with cursed energy, a cursed technique is needed. Cursed energy blast is possible without CT

    Ch 16 Watching Movie {16}
    The yellow flash of jujutsu high
    Komik · Ppp_Pppp
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Berkomentar

    As always same cliché stuff, probably will go after boosted gear

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: Coming Together
    Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent
    Komik · Bronz_Deck
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Berkomentar

    No, it's just my opinion but this Aiden and Evelyn stuff is overcomplicating stuff

    No.
    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Komik · ZYREX_01
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Berkomentar

    sorry if I was too hard on you but I feel you have a good story but u are making it troublesome by dissociating his name.

    Ch 1 * Please share your thoughts. *
    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Komik · ZYREX_01
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Balas ZYREX_01

    yes just rewrite it without the Aiden and Evelyn element, it's making the story needlessly complicated

    Ch 10 10 :- "Lunch At Nonaka House"
    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Komik · ZYREX_01
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Berkomentar

    I'm out, just messed up the story because u wanted the MC's name to be Aiden, if u wanted it that bad u should have just made him an OC to take Basara's place, what parent would like to find out their child is another person. You said readers should drop suggestions but it seems u don't acknowledge them

    Ch 7 07 :- “Who Are You?”
    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Komik · ZYREX_01
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Balas N_Nelson

    *are

    A/n :- Hello, dear readers. I understand there might be some confusion regarding the use of two names, so allow me to clarify. Aiden has been reincarnated as Basara. Basara regained his memories due to an impact to the back of his head. However, no one around him is aware that Basara has recovered his past life memories. Therefore, those around him will continue to refer to him as Basara. The name Aiden is used from an omniscient point of view. Rest assured, any confusion regarding names will be resolved in the forthcoming chapters, and the name Aiden will be incorporated into the story.
    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Komik · ZYREX_01
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Berkomentar

    agreed, why are you so focused on using the name Aiden , he's reincarnated as Basara so why don't you use the name, you aemre forcing this too much, determine his name and clarify it once and for all, it's not a big deal.

    A/n :- Hello, dear readers. I understand there might be some confusion regarding the use of two names, so allow me to clarify. Aiden has been reincarnated as Basara. Basara regained his memories due to an impact to the back of his head. However, no one around him is aware that Basara has recovered his past life memories. Therefore, those around him will continue to refer to him as Basara. The name Aiden is used from an omniscient point of view. Rest assured, any confusion regarding names will be resolved in the forthcoming chapters, and the name Aiden will be incorporated into the story.
    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Komik · ZYREX_01
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson1mth
    Balas SuryaputraKarna

    i agree, choose a name for the MC Author, you already said Aiden is dead that he is now Basara. I Don get why you are attached to the Aiden name unless it's yours

    Ch 4 04 :- “I Want A Kiss,” 
    DxD: Testament of Desires
    Komik · ZYREX_01
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson2mth
    Berkomentar

    why do u like status pages do much

    Ch 45 NEW FIC!!!
    Spider-Man X.
    Komik · Saintbarbido
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson2mth
    Balas Keisen_Shishigo

    they will cancel each other out infinte spin vs infinite distance should be like undefined or zero

    Ch 4 4 The Golden Calling
    Reborn as Nanami Kento
    Komik · Divine_Sex_Dragon
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson2mth
    Diterbitkan

    Nice. can u drop a link to the raw. .......

    Naruto: Gojo Satoru Is The Strongest
    Komik · Takamiya_Shin
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson3mth
    Berkomentar

    this ROB stuff is getting old and you made mc a simp who doesn't get revenge on anyone who hurts him

    Ch 9 chapter 09: Heretic Vampire
    TVD: reborn Heretic Vampire
    Televisi · spirits07
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson3mth
    Berkomentar

    so will he be a simp who doesn't get revenge because a siphoner getting jumped by a vampire is very unlikely. i know u don't want ur mc to be overpowered but don't downgrade him too much

    Ch 8 chapter 08: Hunt Begins
    TVD: reborn Heretic Vampire
    Televisi · spirits07
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  • N_Nelson
    N_Nelson3mth
    Balas GoldenOsiris

    why must it always be a system fic

    Iron Man in DC
    Komik · GoldenOsiris
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