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Not enough descriptions of the world/setting. Overly sexually female characters, unclear plot, too cliched, a lot of phrases need to be rewritten for clarity, there's an abundance of filler words, descriptions are bland and stale. Use grammarly and a thesaurus to better your writing.

This author has great potential. His plotline is interesting. Grammar is impeccable, it definitely has great potential to be a top novel in the future! Let's the climb to the top together fellow author

Good pacing. There are a few sentences and instances where grammar could be better phrased or fixed. The plot isn't dull to the point of boredom. This novel makes for a relaxing read.

He's not useless 💀. His sister is right there. They're outside. Why go read a book when his sister is literally an expert when it comes to these beasts?

Dope stuff. I look forward to seeing the author improve and where the plot will lead to. The author needs to pace his scenes better and rephrase some sentences here and there but it's already an enjoyable read. Good luck writing!

Plotline is fun and understandable, grammar could use some work, and the world building and descriptions of it could be better but overall, it's a nice and enjoyable read.

The mc has one love interest. Their relationship will gradually build up

Hello, it's TheWanderingBard here! I've 11 chapters stockpiled and will be releasing 1 chap per day(so the updates should be fairly consistent). I hope you all enjoy the read! I'm a new author so if you've spotted any mistakes in my chapters please point them out. I also welcome any feedback/suggestions with open arms. Have a great timeee!

Good plotline but i feel like there are some instances of awkward phrasing and bad grammar. Nice pace, paragphs are easy on the eyes which makes it an enjoyable read. I'd love to see how far this author will go! Good luck!

Thanks for the review! I'll continue to put out quality work!

World background and stability of updates is quite good. Although I would suggest working on the grammar and capitlisation more so that the paragraphs are easy on the eyes and readers won't get disenchanted when reading your novel. I see good potential in here. Maybe you should use grammarly or prowritingaid to help make your writing even better! Good luck author

This story has potential. I suggest that the author write in past tense as, generally, that's more attractive to readers. Grammar isn't *too* bad, flow is quite nice, good storyline so far. Nice and enjoyable read if edited thoroughly. Good luck author

Unique title. Lovely pacing/flow. Grammar isnt the best but it doesnt affect the story too much. Looking forward to how the story ends. Good luck and keep up the good work author!

Very funny. I love the pacing and the mc's humour. Looking forward to reading more of this! Barely any grammar mistakes. Good flow. Characters have depth. I must recommend!

Very interesting premise. I'm looking forward to reading more chapters and seeing how far this novel will go. There are very few grammar mistakes with awkward phrasing here and there but that doesn't affect the story too drastically. Paragraphs are easy on the eyes which make this a very fun and relaxing read. Keep up the good work!

The story is interesting. Some phrases need to be rephrased here and there but it doesn't affect the story too dramatically. I'm excited to see where this goes. Keep up the good work author.

The author has a great sense of flow, pacing, and grammar. There are very few mistakes. In addition to this, the style of writing and dialogue make it a very enjoyable and releaxing read. Keep up the good work author!

Good pacing. The mc is quite interesting and the way in which he died was quite unique as well. Near impeccable grammar with easy on the eye paragraphs makes this novel an enjoyable and relaxing reaed. Great job author! Keep up the momentum, I hope to read more of your chapters. :D

Really nice story/plotline, I love the comedy. Some phrases could be rephrased for clarity but other than that all is good! Looking forward to reading and seeing how this story develops! :D Keep it going author!