where is google

really a good way to revile a character

this chapter was massed up hope i can understand it in next chapter 😂😂😂

you dont have to use those ** we can understand what you mean

whats the problem why always cliffs

cuz both are male

this part is kind mixup use name in place of his cuz

nice you guy keep improving ☺️

this chapter was good you show the king in a appropriate way and good luck and i really like your story i want to know more about it and please try publish at least 2 chapters in a week if you can thank you

your story is good but need more work on it and try to improve your writing quality and they you explained explain the characters is good and try to write fast and at last wold building is good but try to give more details good luck

Man this story is really good the way you fix the way of thinking is amazing the character design and way of telling about them its really good i am looking for more mysteries good luck

The story is good but you need to give more details about the world and try to to publish chapters quick cuz like me or other poeple are w8ing for next chapter if you keep delay the people won't read it good luck

I really like this kind of stuff and but nice work you know how attract people nice use of clip hunger nice i look forward to read your other novel