Beth_Holly

The story plot is good, I would just recommend proofreading before posting. I noticed some of the sentences were not structured as well as they could be. Sometimes reading over what you write can help you catch mistakes.

Lol, now you know the guy is good looking when another very good looking guy thinks that.

I really enjoy this comic and the storyline. It is funny to see Mu Shen reject Ruan at first but the more time he spends with her his affection is growing stronger and his becoming more protective of her. I am really enjoying the developing storyline and look forward to see how things come out for Ruan.

Just saying, but I thought angels didn't lie? Lucifer technically doesn't lie he just doesn't tell the whole truth.

What a brave women she actually told him what she was thinking that made her laugh.! OMG.

It is interesting how Lord Nicholas Rune seems to be falling in love with his cousin's intended wife. I can't wait how this one turns out!

I enjoy this first book in the series, the characters were well written and the story was interesting enough to keep reading to the next chapter.

The saying is actually, "kill or be killed." Typo possibly with the arrangement of words?