Fearless_wolf
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Fearless_wolf9 days agoDiterbitkanIt is a book with an interesting narrative. Although there are three or five small details that disrupt the flow, they are not that disturbing. It's just that the time jumps are not a good alternative way of moving from scene to scene. I would have preferred a little description of the journey. I wish you success! Write lots of chapters, okay?
- Fearless_wolf10 days agoBerkomentar
[InsertNameHere]: usage affects the fluency negatively, my friend.
- Fearless_wolf10 days agoBerkomentar
It's an interesting first episode. If the future episodes are as interesting as this one, it seems like it can reach good places.
- Fearless_wolf4 months agoBerkomentar
So if you bring democracy to this magical medieval world, you get a huge amount of points...
- Fearless_wolf5 months agoBerkomentar
Go Henrietta! Slay that witch!
- Fearless_wolf5 months agoBalas Joe_Olvastar
A book devourer
- Fearless_wolf7 months agoBerkomentar
Ban pan??
- Fearless_wolf8 months agoBerkomentar
I wonder what kind of an apocalypse would happen in the city if these were found naked?