Jim Beglin😹😹

Good job here. It was really a story to read. Well presented and executed.

Her abilities will be fully explained in future chapters or in an auxiliary chapter. Thank you.

Thank you. The spags will be looked into and corrected.

Mbappe!!!!!

Let's see how it goes.

You made a mistake of Valdor for Noah.

Daarc, I think the spelling should be Conviction.

Thank you! All corrections have now been made.

Thank you!

better way to put Use the eyes of your mind or soul. whichever you wish.

route arts*

the first line is confusing

and could not leave*

Noah, not Moah

before reaching*

they walked through*

found a found❌

they all push for what they*

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