The story is very interesting for a new reader like me. If possible I would like to support this author. Please keep writing and make the best out of it.

Grammar mistakes here and there and mostly the full stops and the commas. Other than that the story is very good. I would say that everyone should read this.

Yeah it is a good book. Prolly I am a new reader so it is easy for me to understand. I hope you will continue your work. And I will keep supporting you.