CornyBarley3737

Let me remind you, they are all children.

As of right now. This book seems just like a re-skin of another book called World Keeper on Royal Road which has a little over 1000 chapters. I do hope as this book goes on, that it starts to become its own thing. And it goes in its own direction. Because as of now, it’s just a re-skin of another book.

They probably accidentally deleted it. Because it happen when they updated it. I just hope they don’t stop posting just by the mistake. Because I actually like the story.

The synopsis says ridgid social norms. That’s funny. Because what your described is the normal social norms in real life but flipped. But when it’s a man that it’s affecting it’s ridgid but when it’s a woman it’s normal.

That’s completely ironic considering what actually happens. In Mha.

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An ‘Inch’ long. Really? That’s to small.

It a fine book not bad not great either. Though later in the book, there’s flash backs and time skips which for some reason aren’t specified when they happen. So it sometimes feels jarring when the Main character is at a place and the next second immediately some where else with no explanation of how they got there.

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Before you read you Should Know that it becomes premium after three chapters. At least at the time im reading this. Thankfully it was limited free. If not i wouldnt of read it. like around a fourth of the way in the story completely changes. And i dont mean a little bit, its like 180 decree change. Its like the author took the beginning of a book and smashed it together with the middle and end of another book. They use the world background to very loosely knit them together. They take the stuff that work, which are very little, and completely ignore the ones that don’t. I mean if you can deal with all that stuff then you may like story after the whole different beginning thing.