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Thank you for taking your time to write this review. About story development- Your complaint is valid, which is why I will try to improve this point the most. I will try to introduce more characters, as well as make some interesting subplots for readers to explore. About character design and the MC. Here I can also understand your disappointment with the expectations I set up, but I also don't want to make my character become a generic overpowered MC and then supplement the story with nothing more than slice of life. Still, I do think it's my mistake for making him look so weak while I made him sound as one of the strongest, so I will also try to remedy this one. But besides that, I thank you for making a normal review that really showcases the weak points of my work. Have a great day.
Not really. At max there will be a 2-3 person harem. There will be some slice of life, obv, but not the entirety of the fanfic.
Well, it's up to you to interpretent it as you see fit, for now. His origin will be explained slowly though, so you just have to wait and see.
:) You are right, but later chapters will explain why he has it.
Magic allows him to use Imagination to complete Calculations, which shortens the spell casting time and also lowers the need for energy, which is used to usually complete the calculations. He simply has to think of what he wants and what it should accomplish, but he doesn't have to calculate anything as the Imagination Magic will do it for him, nor does he need to calculate the specifics of the spell. If that makes sense to you.
I didn't really take any reference from any mythology or legend. He also isn't technically corrected to Biblical Faction, but he also is to some extent.
Nah.
Well, you got a wrong impression of him. Although he isn't fixed on revenge anymore, it doesn't mean that he is suddenly 'good'. But well, you can only read more and find it out later. ;)
Yeah well, the point of him being sealed is to not make him overpowered from the get-go. I have also seen quite a few stories that simply made the character too OP from the start and the story ended prematurely or simply wasn't engaging to read. All I can say is that I can only hope myself that I will not rush nor succumb to pressure, but thank you for supporting me. It helps a lot, really.
Who knows if he will be a lonesome man or not? You will just have to wait and see :) No genderbend.