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This is why fan don’t write. It called character writing shit

Stfu

Brother this is clearly the best Naruto male si ever and you truly are a great author

Beautiful start. And great transition

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we don't most of the time nothing is ever coming that fast is to constantly use so it improve

you can't train kinetic vision just by working out, you may be trying to give this character meta vision but unless u method the train the vision all the people who had were all just gift with a great feel for the game

no it not

anyone with a brain knew he was going to be a marine simply by the book cover

i don't think Cedric should get conquer haki. he doesn't have kingly ambition. but would be cool is going further beyond with original. one of the strongest I the world without conquer