Chill_Man

bro read the synopsis

well I don't mind the op MC. I am up for some face slapping in the multiverse too. I enjoy the lemons you write too. but I also won't mind if this is dropped. just... don't delete the existing chapters. also I haven't seen a Ben 10 fanfiction in a while. infact any old cartoons being overpowered in another world is ok.

bro listen to me! LISTEN TO ME! do not mess this up ok! I don't care if you want harem or not, if you want to take the story in whatever direction you want! This is you story and you have the right to write it however you want! BUT PLEASE DON'T DROP THIS FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!

well I guess when you say it like that it makes some sense. it also somewhat explains his behaviour.

alright I am going to get something off my chest today. specifically something about the personallity and behaviour of Peter Parker the MC. at first it was quite fine he acted normally. then, I don't know what went wrong, he started acting in...frankly quite an unsettling manner. I know you are trying to portray a carefree op protagonist, one made such because of his immortality and superpowers, but it became quite creepy for me. the way you wrote how he randomly laughs out loud, giggles weirdly, how he walks with a skip. it's like you are writing a weird joker-spiderman character origin. I don't know if I am imagining too much but it's what I think. overall great story though

huh kind of a weird interpretation of the character of Naruto but sure you do you I guess.

i love this story I absolutely do. but one thing always bothers me. doesn't Ryuu's world have same pop culture and media as us? your telling me out of the probably hundreds of people Ryuu has used powers in front of. no one was like, "are...are you referencing war hammer?"

i wanted to finish captain America's movie first and go to that direction

of course my man. I am trying to make him as powerful as possible to make sure if he ever went to other fanfics he will be stronger than the Rob of that fanfic.

in many versions of Greek mythology it is said how the gods grew up extremely fast and that was one of the reasons why feeding Kronos stone instead of the child was extremely easy as Kronos was in constant pain with full grown gods in his stomach. but according to the percy Jackson wiki in the Percy Jackson universe the gods grew at a normal pace as mentioned in one of the lines in the wiki how rhea had raised him in secret and he was made known of his heritage when he was a full grown adult. I decided to change things up obviously