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Aaron_Chong_6689

Lv4

that's a secret.

2021-05-31 BergabungGlobal
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  • Aaron_Chong_6689
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    Balas Rexburn12

    read the chap again, theres a part that said it should have isntantly killed him, yet he still lasted a while, keep that in mind

    And that was the plan, infect Raditz and kill him. A simple idea to be honest, but it stood a high chance at working; so I began. My body responded to my commands, my arms writhed into blackness, that soon released red mist that looked toxic by sight...
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    Balas Rexburn12

    yeah, blacklight has literally infinite storage for biomass, mercer can stack up on as much as he wanted without feeling burned or full canonically, as well as in game cutscenes too. It sounds strange as a reality bending feat, but it is

    I had forgotten that the virus literally had minor reality warping capabilities. Maybe this universe had slightly different laws of logic... Regardless, I looked of in the distance.
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    Balas Rexburn12

    nah, although I didnt give the distance, it was a couple kilometers away, remember that the mc has extreme senses

    Raditz's eyes narrowed, sensing something was off, but he didn't seem to notice the subtle changes from this far. That was good; I needed him to be off guard.
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    Balas EtherealStar

    I personally had a dumb moment here, I was just too lazy to right that last bit

    "Urghhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGHHHHH!!!!!!!" He felt a years worth of collective work, experience and knowledge all being cramped in within a second, unknown to him, both his nose and ears began to bleed profusely. If it wasn't for the capacity of his mind being enhanced, his brain would have melted...
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    Balas EtherealStar

    Naruto and Sasuke have immense potential compared tot he rest of the verse to be fair.

    I realized that both of my speed limits had entered the speed of light ranges, and my strength had went into the Tera-Ton range, I hadn't had a clue as to how high an actual Tera-Ton really was...
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    Balas Iros

    oh nooo

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    Balas Taro

    you know what, it was dumb, I wont bother explaining it anymore

    "Urghhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGHHHHH!!!!!!!" He felt a years worth of collective work, experience and knowledge all being cramped in within a second, unknown to him, both his nose and ears began to bleed profusely. If it wasn't for the capacity of his mind being enhanced, his brain would have melted...
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    Balas Taro

    All of them had years worth, it wouldn't make that much of difference.

    "Urghhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGHHHHH!!!!!!!" He felt a years worth of collective work, experience and knowledge all being cramped in within a second, unknown to him, both his nose and ears began to bleed profusely. If it wasn't for the capacity of his mind being enhanced, his brain would have melted...
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    Balas Iros

    i was joking initially btw about the better than you thing, just wanted to say that, also, your story seems fine to me, and lastly, stay away from my story, its mid as hell.

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    Balas Iros

    it does, I'm probably the only person on here that scales systems realistically, at least numbers wise, and yes, I have multiple fanfictions, only 1 being written now, the rest are discontinued.

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    Balas Iros

    I think my mc negs yours. (raises head in cockiness)

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    Balas Mellow_Potato

    mostly due to basic human sympathy, ditching her and looking for her, only to find her tortured at an enemy base

    "...No... That place would have ceased to exist..."
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    Balas JoyousRebellion

    it's just an unfortunate event, to some degree, and due to the mc...

    It's clear she was tortured, likely for the past few weeks. Bloodied and bruised, almost unrecognizable with the muck and grime on her body. How did she even end up in this situation? How?
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    Balas JoyousRebellion

    mc has been looking for her for weeks, plus ditching her and seeing a woman in a state like that all cam together to trigger him.

    Ch 27 CHP 27: Kurenai?...
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    Balas Rexburn12

    it's true, especially for female nins, they have a higher chance of getting far worse treatment, btw, this story is aiming to be realistic in choices.

    "Kurenai signed up for this kind of treatment the moment she began her path as a shinobi... I'm just glad it wasn't any worse than this." He told her.
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    Balas GodOfLight

    might as well write a ruthless mc story then bro

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    Balas ISuMin

    hmm, alright, if you give me a reasonable explanation, I'll delete this chapter and rewrite it the way you think it should be, but I hope you don't come with the notion that the mc should just nuke Orochimaru. No bs, no nonsense.

    Ch 27 CHP 27: Kurenai?...
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    Balas Rk6T

    maybe not for everyone, but for only 1, let's be real, there must have been some point in your life where you helped a dude.

    'It's the least I can do for you daniel, we both need power, more so you... And I'd hate for on of my favorite mc to squander his potential like this...' Jacob mused.
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    Balas Mellow_Potato

    he doesn't love her, bro literally has no one at this point.

    "...No... That place would have ceased to exist..."
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    Balas ISuMin

    just think it through, it makes sense

    Ch 27 CHP 27: Kurenai?...
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