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Your point? The fact is that they both didn't know how to make one, yet Hajime managed it while this guy's wallowing in ignorance without even trying.
Isn't he a dragon? Or is he simply a human with draconic traits
In Siegfrieds case, using those demonic blades would drain his life force. He fought, knowing he wouldn't live long. As for exorcists, it's still a dead-end path, with middle class being the limit for most even if they implant a holy factor like they did with Irina.
Dude got so annoying with the c*ckblocking assassin that his nigh omniscience failed. Women truly are men's fatalis....
That's because of Nature Energy. Find me somebody else in Narutoverse who tanks ninjutsu through just their physical body alone and come out unscathed. I'll wait.
Well. it's my personal opinion that God's and Goddesses should be the ones to recruit, not just blindly accepting anybody their child brings, but that's just me. As for Bell, the anime downplayed his emotional intelligence severely. In the LN, the dude would recognize the flirting and attempts and get excited for it, but would gaslight himself into thinking that they weren't serious and were only teasing him.
For the record, Shikamarus Shadow Possession Jutsu isn't a KG, but a hiden Jutsu (hidden clan). It's a clan exclusive jutsu. Anybody can learn it if they are taught it a d the seals are adapted to their person.
You both seem to miss something. It was Hestia who one-sidedly pursued Bell. Bell, from the start, viewed mortals and dieties as two completely incompatible beings in terms of romance. Plus, they went on for 2 or 3 weeks of living completely on their own, a situation that's already impossible here. Not to mention that Blake and Hestia are already sleeping together, so unless the author unilaterally screws it up, there shouldn't be a situation where Bell and/or Hestia become interested in each other.
If you do change that, DO NOT nerf Kai in a bid to equalize them. That will make its quality crash down even further.
The main thing that's probably lowering the quality of the novel is the lack of actual fights. You've made Kai equal to All Might a bit too early on instead of making it gradual, so any fights that do happen only have 1 end result, which is Kai winning, yes or yes. Considering that you already have One Piece and HxH elements in, I would suggest introducing them as OCs and separate organizations that function under the rules that MHA has. You could touch on the heroes and villain groups of other countries, as they had only briefly been mentioned in movies, and Stars and Stripe, respectively.