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Two whole chapters on him being confused is...a unique approach. Hopefully, he gets his current situation now, and is not on edge anymore 😅

🤔There are Literally warnings on the first chapter about the less than perfect grammar of the novel. I Guess you missed that Or maybe you still didn't believe it and still gave a comment and Reviewed like you where tricked, it was pretty up front man.🤨

🤨If it ain't broke, don't fix it. Making appropriate changes to fit the new world is fine. But letting his ego float, and possibly ruin everything is stupid. Artistic integrity? What's that? can it be eaten? He has a plagiarist dream library for a cheat, just keep calm and profit.

🤨Short? Your trolling right? It was a Bizarre end for a needlessly long arc. He had A million ways to cook her, but he chose the law. Fine, That's okay. She was found guilty, Cool. But then you incite her to kill herself using her kids as leverage, what?😮 What was the point of it all now? Why not do that from the start? Just extra steps to Keep your righteous indignation and reputation? It's not for so-called morals anymore, as that went out the minute you put the gun on the table. Now he's just as hypocritical as the heroes brainwashing people, after all that guff and smoke you gave others and refusing the consequences of ending true threats, (beyond joker level)your self keep your reputation. I don't think he's going down the villain route anymore, which makes this action even more frustrating for some readers, as it sometimes feels like the story is written as you go, with watery chapters not concise with no overall plan in mind.😔 Whatever, it's still a decent story, despite my gripes, I will read to see how this ends.🙂

Taking random serums from strangers who lurk on you...😕 Novel intel -1

🤔Didn't this Mc have a cheat of some sort before? why is he now taking broken DC super-soldier serums? Always being an apprentice to others is getting old, all those battles and he's still so childish, throwing tantrums. Hopefully, this arc has some character growth, both mentally and in mcs overall skill level🙂

🤔On second thought, You know what, these are not bad plot points for a fan fiction route to take, I might as well make a fanfiction about this myself, so Author feel free to delete these comments 🙂

1. sell the old faulty arc reactors Ivan can make cheaply for great amounts of cash by underground auction. 2. secretly Trademark the new element arc Reactor. 3. with money made selling old reactors to shady people buy the stark stock at its lowest during the press conference until you have more than 52%, 4. make genius tony work for you in unwillingness. success is the best revenge, that is if you don't want blood on the new Russian body's hands. Be a villain, but be an intelligent one, not a clown looking for validation from marvel plot characters.

What? you Already died once, and that's WHY you should rightfully be clinging to life MC! your lack of concern comes off as having suicidal tendencies to appease these random super natural entities, one after the other, with no regard or caution for your suspiciously given new life you've been living. Mc is lacking, go with the flow, it's out of my hands, yes men type🤨 also the story rhythm seems weirdly off when reading🤔

mind blowing conclusion I never considered, simping=loss×2