Ichigo_Uzumaki

I pick option three… definitely Harry interacting with God‘s gaining more authorities and tracking down the horcrux annd offing Voldemort!

As he spends so much time in Scotland, it wouldn’t be out of the realm of possibility for one of the Celtic deities to descend. That might give you a few new ideas for maybe one of his nextauthorities.

Use the fade to black, but give some basic highlights of the events that took place.

I think having her join Harry as one of his Knights is a great idea!

This is a wonderful premise for a story. But these chapters just keep dragging on and not actually getting anywhere. I understand you want to get other people’s perspectives for the development of the story, but you don’t need to dedicate a whole chapters to nothing but everybody else’s point of view and leave the story stagnant. Try interspersing these points of view from the other characters in between paragraphs not chapters and continuing on the story with Harry.

I really love this story. It brings enough crossover elements from other genres to make the story interesting and new, without being too cumbersome. The main character is really well written with a deep and well thought out background and he fits into the story perfectly.

I am very sorry to hear about what has happened. Take time for yourself to make sure you’re in a good place. We all need to mourn after we lose someone and it does you know good to try to ignore it. We will all be here to read your story when you’re ready to write some more.

GET OVER HERE!!!

It is an ability. It’s an ability he got from the contract, Wind manipulation.

Great story just like all the others that he writes. I like the fact that without bashing anybody you can tell which characters he likes and which ones he doesn’t. He brings attention to characters that most fanfiction writers ignore or make the villain. I love the use of an original character from a devil clan that is part of Canon, but not utilized in the manga or anime. Now if only we can get updates to the stories in greater frequency we would all be happier.