inklingparker

A very weird sorta style of writing which is nice, the characters seem to be different and entertaining which is very important. The story is offbeat which always add

an interesting novel with very authentic characters. the use of profanity is nice giving a more down to earth reaction which is unique. all though the character doesn't feel like she has much to them

I know a lot of people don't enjoy long paragraphs but man I love them, especially when they're worth the read. The only problem is you need catch the attention of the reader more yk.

I got a bit confused (i haven't watched the anime yet) but wow I was able to get invested because of the quality of the writing. Sometimes it was jarring to see the different styles of words but I guess they were comedic

It has a very provincial style of writing which is great. Nothing wrong at all with the pacing, characters. The only problem is it may lack depth which is fine for a web novel but with your skills, you can definitely get a published book

This novel has everything man I must read, that scene with the french toast is perfect as well. and it has well-rounded characters and an interesting plot

nice

yeah my apologies with the grammar, not the best speller, but I'm working on the next chapter which will realise in a few minutes

Wow I love the plot twist in this story, it gets very twisty but the main thing is the twits work. Oh and the power part is really I'm interested to see how that goes

hey i was wondering if you could review my book as well