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don't give up .... I will read it.... and later review it as per my knowledge ... alright 👍😊

awesome

Almost fine and a bit interesting ----________________'_________________''''''''______________________________________________________________

yeah

I guess you want to say that please to read

The story is over all nice and my favourite character is i guess you know but i want to told you separately that it's ~~~~larry oh my he is so cool pleased to write and i want more chapters

It's good but i want more chapters please i want to know what happened to the kid after wards the novel is overall classic...the character are yet to develop bond but still it's my type of novel...

AMAZING 😁😁😁😁😁 so good keep going....though there is a bit of confusion about the main lead but i guess the still is just start to began so it will take time to take a shape although it's good

I must say it's good but I want that there is some clearly description over characters i got a little confused but it's fine .I like her dog it's good if there is some more about scene and description about it