Lahar_Archmage

Sadly there was no chapters last days and i got left at Momo cliffhanger :(

Author, currently there are whole brain implants that create something like AI, but with biological brain. They block & create signals that are limited to certain database of thoughts thus allowing to read mind and semi-control subject (for example inserting messages, blocking short memory and forcing suggestions to get semi-control, etc.), but that result in lower brain capability & a lot of negative effects. It has been done on animals and in darkness probably on humans, so... sci-fi should cover this topic and i think this paragraph creates plot hole.

Well written story, good character design and world background. I would rate it 5/5 only if updates would be more frequent. So far there is so little written and yet chapters get hidden behind privilege :/ It would be okay if we get at least one chapter per day, but we do not.

+1, you just totally destroyed author :D There is some truth about that because his main novel has massive plot holes problems everywhere later in story.

Great novel, not so good start, but gets better really fast. The major problem i can currently see is that novel is updated very slowly :( I hope chapters will be longer or frequency of updates increase.

Looks good, can't wait for what trouble first "witcher" news create in galaxy :)

Yeah, MC is almost at "brick" level. Check later chapters where plot holes appear and instead getting fixed they just get bigger. I've read over 700 chapters and there is more of them making story broken. For example he got rank 4 herb to lvl up that can be eat directly, but author totally forgot about it and MC waits to gather one more energy orb so he can get as fast as possible to general realm, but he can do it anytime...

there is nowhere in story info that he can't use long bow dao, it would be better if you could fix this mistake in previous chapters because it cause confusion :/

plot hole ate bow dao, i wonder why author do not fix chapters with missing things or grammar mistakes that i often found.

Does MC improve or he is "brick" whole story? I have it on my next to read list and i really hate when author makes stupid MC for no reason. Like you said it makes people hate whole novel even if it has good writing :/