The story captivates with a solid plot and well-developed characters. The writing is polished, but there are opportunities to deepen certain aspects of the background for an even more immersive experience.

I found your story creative with intriguing twists and turns. The connections between chapters and the themes explored were well orchestrated! However, maybe a few details could have been fleshed out further to enhance coherence.

It's a very captivating beginning. Can't wait to find out what happens next