Fake_Danwini

Hey there! This is your 110%, not a bot review! I had read up to chapter five and really enjoyed the idea of the world!. Seems like there is an intergalactic ranking of beings and the idea that one would take pity and save a hyuuuman babe was really fun to imagine. The only thing that made me really disinterested in continuing was the pace at which events were happening. I felt as though it was just lightspeed with how we moved from the mom to the AI and then to the whole debacle. Feels like there was a lot of missed opportunity to tell a story there. You just started to there is plenty of time to go back and mess around with it if you wanted to, which I encourage. I think you have something that'd be really cool if you developed it a bit more. Keep at it!