Emmanuel_Bastug

Wow, that is awesome but I feel like Teach is quite pathetic. To be qualified to stand at the top he needs Conquerer’s Haki but instead he made up for it with Devil Fruits. He might have the ambition for great things but if his will is so weak he can’t have the qualities of the king than he isn’t qualified.

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Haha, Guy sensei never change, his attitude is refreshing when he isn’t freaking people out with his antics.

That was great , I especially liked how you analyzed their strengths and weaknesses. I appreciated Bakugo being calmer and was able to keep his emotions in check, well at least for a while. But so far I like how the story is developing, keep up the good work!

Fair enough, maybe after this Hogwarts will try to protect him better. I mean it did show him the secret rooms and probably alerted Sanpe to help Harry. So maybe everything will fall into place after Harry experienced this event.

You know what Harry should do? Put an artifact on himself to protect from surprise attacks invade this happens again. That way he can regain his focus and handle the situation . Also see if he can get the Diadem of Ravenclaw so that he could learn things faster like martial arts to protect himself and than workout. That is if it isn’t already a horucrux then forget it, but have a similar item. It would be pretty handy to have on himself.

True but you know what he should have done? He should have put a barrier around himself at all times to protect himself like his possessions. Also try to not be lost in thought and start working out.

You should have had Harry fight back or something, I mean he has a wand and knows spells. I don’t want Harry to be seen as helpless like that.

I like the fanfic revolving around dragon ball what ruins it are when they go on hiatus.

Have them create a technique that increases gravity like what they do with telekinesis and weight themselves down constantly even in the gravity chamber. Then make a technique that puts strain on the body like the Kaioken and keep it active while training under the affects of the multiplier and gravity. That should increase the results of there training with those techniques stacked, when they can handle the strain first.