BlueBlutterfly

Will main character meet with his daughter and wife again in future? Well this is mainly going to be spoiler. Author pleas keep up the great work. 👍👍

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Okay so here is my review about the story Updating stability : Excellent. Writing Quality : Nice and simple, Almost no Grammertical mistakes and writing capability of author is improving with each chapter. World Background: Can't say much since it is at start only. Story Development:Nice and good plotline though inspired by "The Novel extra" , but few things are better than that novel like Time being given to develop side character, one of the negative point of THE is it was all about main character, each chapter becoming main character this and that and did not have a satisfactory ending. Few advice from me to author though please refrain from giving way too many skills to main character reader tend to forget if there are way too many skills in mc disposal and becomes confusing. And most important of all sometime main character need to suffer a loss too. Mainly because we know that a main character who always win becomes plain boring. Character Development: Main character : Firstly I need to tell that he is not very righteous. Biggest example of this is hollberg massacre where he let innocent children die to achieve his goal. So he is not my type of ideal main character where I prefer Smart and righteous type of main character like Mc of Lord of Mysteries. Second he is somewhat a type who wants basic control over everything now this exactly is not negative point but not exactly a positive point too. Since if something changes he somewhat seem to me type to panic (This is my opinion though can be wrong) Few positive point are High battle Iq. Know his weakness and strength He is smart And many more As for other side character they are good. That all for review overall novel is going very good and Author please keep up the good work.

Author sama will there be Angels and god in story?

Author if I am not wrong Prometheus was given a very big punishment of being his liver continuously eaten by vultures, maybe he got himself out of it.

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Thanks for the chapter author sama

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