MAJUNEPea
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Shape changer
Infinite Omniversal Energy for the win
Nice Story Author, I like the idea ,and this is the kind of story I enjoy. But there is one problem I want to point out, which is the mc being too dumb for my liking, as someone who was from earth with all those wild Ideas from anime's, he could've handled that situation better with that squid monster 👾, like using his system to scout ahead because he said" he won't let any one die" or making his avatar stronger if he can creat a squid monster with basically (absorption/adaptive evolution) he can definitely make an avatar stronger or how he is always to late to react, that sh*t annoys me to no end, like isn't he outside the universe can he just pause the world 🌏 and save said person. Anyways, Sorry for the rant but that's my little observation, wel-done again author you are doing great so far.
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