Yup, I cut the post generic scene. I wanted to end on part 3 and it was getting long.

Oh, shut up.

Great potential if well executed. Video game aesthetic in power systems has sort of become a cliché at this point but I believe the author will be able to find a new approach to the genre. It is a bit on the nose and the main character gets over grief a bit too fast, but everything else seems fine. I will probably catch up with future chapters.

Glad you liked it ! More chapters are coming soon.

Fairly interesting. Some grammatical errors here and there but nothing drastic. Reminiscent of anime like “That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime” so if that’s your stuff, this novel will probably be for you.

Hi, yes, this is my story. Breakable Space-Time is a project that I have been working on since November 2019. The story has already been written in script format and I am currently transferring it into a novel. If you’re looking for something a little closer to traditional novels; with confrontations that aren’t based on who’s the most overpowered; with an interesting power system that’s not a copy from RPGs; with references to anime, video games, movies, and pop culture; with realistic characters and some funny moments, this is the novel for you. My chapters are fairly long, but I can make them shorter if that’s what the people want. - Arylite