god_of_time
Lv2
2021-04-14 BergabungUnited States
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god_of_time2yrBerkomentarAncient*
Within a faraway world, a child lazily walked through a town with hands behind the back of his head. This was the young man who had his wish granted to him, his name was Sora, and in this new world he from himself in seemed to be one of agent time, a place where things such as phone people had no concept of here- god_of_time2yrBalas DaoistZGgE0GCh 13 Chapter 13 - Side Quest
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no
4-possible continuation of the story in the same verse but with another mc - god_of_time2yrBerkomentar
1
3-exploration of outside the planet or simple earth to earth, human to human story - god_of_time2yrBerkomentar
well written
2-well written plot with foreshadowing and character development or a simple story - god_of_time2yrBerkomentar
mc is super weird looking
Bab ini telah dihapus. - god_of_time2yrBerkomentarAshiba couldn't help but tremble, his whole body was shaking, his eyes almost couldn't contain the red glow from his eyes. He was not trembling with anger and sadness at the deaths of the villagers or the destruction of his home nor was he shaking in fear of the powers of the shinobis. No..those weak creatures weren't worthy enough for him to show those emotions, tools don't deserve his emotions after all.
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i prefer longer chapters
Here is the next day of in Kou's new life as a goblin. It ended up being a lot longer than I expected. Please tell me if you guys like longer chapters. I am going to try for a chapter every week or every other week. It is to allow me to build up the story with our rushing me to push it out. The reason is that my writing comes out in spurts of inspiration that cause the words to vomit out. - god_of_time2yrBerkomentar
this writing style is alot better
Bab ini telah dihapus.