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literl01020hBerkomentarCh 32 Three Ancient Sages- literl01020hBerkomentarAshley considered for a moment before nodding. "Deal."
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Where can I get a wingman like this?
The actual truth was that [Wisdom God Raphael] had manipulated the probability to make Veldora encounter Rudiya. The skill wanted to teach the fools a lesson for insulting her master. Even Veldora himself didn't know about this. - literl0101dBerkomentarCh 37 Chapter 37: Frustration
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Never seen someone so happy over a green hat
Overwhelmed by emotion, Drum dropped to the ground and hugged Veldora's legs, tears streaming down his cheeks. "Thank you, thank you, Lord Veldora!" he exclaimed, his voice choked with gratitude. - literl0104dDiterbitkan
The author is superb at character interactions, and is able to convey emotion incredibly well in a natural and believable way. I'm a big fan of the author's other works, but I have to say that this is their best yet. Grammar and spelling are perfect, chapter length is great, character design is interesting and engaging. Really hope this doesn't get dropped.
- literl0105dBerkomentarCh 28 New pet (R18)
- literl0106dBerkomentarCh 304 Chapter 299: Baiting The Elite Part 5
- literl01029dBerkomentarCh 24 Chapter 23: Division Commanders
- literl01030dBerkomentarCh 23 Chapter 22: Kingdom Preparations
- literl0101mthBerkomentarCh 288 Chapter 283: A Lesson To Remember Part 2 (R-18)
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I don't mind what happens as long as it makes sense to his character and the story. My criticism in the previous story was that I didn't think it made sense with that character, not the act itself.
The result of the poll was leaving it up to my choice(thank you for your faith in me by the way) and I have decided on Becoming a Devil because it was both what the most people were leaning toward and because it seems like the most logical and interesting way to progress the story. - literl0101mthBerkomentar
Should be: "His heart pulsated within his chest"
"I'm not interested," The words rung in Mark's head as they walked home together, Mark was shocked beyond words but he steadied himself and gripped his bag tightly- His heart pulsated within his heart, letting loose constant beats… Mark's thoughts swirled, they crowded his sight. - literl0101mthBerkomentar
I'm definitely here for both, good plot with some regular smut is the icing on the cake.
Moving on to more pressing matters, NSFW. I've read many of your comments, messages, and suggestions. This is my first attempt in that area, and it was certainly difficult. This scene took me a lot of time to write, more than making an average chapter. So, I've decided to change that 40% to 10% or 15%, as it seems that the vast majority of you are here for the plot rather than the smut. - literl0101mthBalas AlmightySkyDxddy
DxD (or some variant) would be fun, plenty of waifus, and varied power levels for plenty of growth and development.
"Establish a Transference Link to World 7890." - literl0101mthBalas TheRamenLord
I'm really happy you took my feedback as constructive, I wasn't trying to moan as I know how hard writing is in English - I can't imagine how hard it would be in a second or third language. I've really enjoyed your work on the whole, and I hope I can in the future too. If not, then it is just not for my taste, and that's fine. Either way, I hope you continue to find success :)