It's human nature to obsess over negative comments to be perfect. But to do that is a disservice to yourself and your fans who give you power stones. In writing there is no perfection. Just like a bunch of different cooks adding new random ingredients doesn't make a perfect dish. We all have to deal with negative comments but we have know when something is constructive when its not worth time addressing.

Dude, just take care of yourself. You don't me an explanation. I got excited for a chapter and now I am depressed. Take responsibility......when you get better.

I like that you included dragon maid. I think for the most part you are on the right path. The beauty of fan fiction is for the readers to see things they won't see in the original but feels faithful. If you want canon go read or watch the original. Plagiarism is boring. I don't want the MC to get into the trap of power where MC constantly grows to be some ultimate being. Its been done over and over again. It leaves author with nothing to write.

In a nutshell ..."I hate you" "Fuck Off" "I'm gonna kill you" "Well now I killed you in self-defense." " You killed them you monster. " Rinse Repeat. It's Naruto but it reads like a Chinese faceslapping novel. Now that the MC is OP I don't see any good plot development. Every character is one-dimensional.

why is Ghislaine called gillen?

I generally come here to listen (tts) to novels while doing something else. I don't expect some epic masterpiece. When I don't know something I err on the side that it is on me. I know from the average comments the people are often dumber then me. I'm not one to tell the author how to write but I think they should be conscious on who is reading their work. I see naruto fan fictions that are just "eh" getting 4.9 rating. Well maybe they are deleting bad reviews.

Looks good so far.

I enjoyed the story at first but it became way too complicated for me. There are too many mysterious characters to keep track. Too much jumping around in perspectives and times. Too much unexplained stuff to care. I skip this one and try the next novel the author makes.

I give everything before Chapter 28 a 1 and after a 5 so its a 3. I recommend starting at 28 because you won't miss anything important and it gets better from there. If it wasn't for the author trashing himself in a review I would have dropped it but i saw something in the writing, I prayed the plot would get better and it did. I don't think this novel deserves this high an average rating because waiting that many chapters of info dumps is just crazy.

I almost never read female protags although female authors are often better at writing. I read this by mistake and said fuck it then continued reading. Now I am at the end looking for the next chapter. There is no otome mushy romance or unnecessary flowery details. Its written for fans of naruto. It covers relationships in way that most male authors fail to.

A solo monster hunting novel. The author writes well enough. I Just don't get why this is a danmachi novel. It could be any kind of template. Like a naruto novel about a kid who only spends time in the forest of death. The premise is over done to death and there are better novels to read in this genre. I am sure if you are new reading that you may find this good but a jaded person like me doesn't see enough novelty to be interested.

Can you put a list of all the people you use and where they are from for reference?

Bottom 20% novel. If you just want a story about a SI pervert Zuko then you may be satisfied as long as you don't have high expectations.

This is how you take a horrifically overused premise and do it well. It's not a perfect story but considering 3 and below is a death sentence on this site, I think it deserves a relative 5. If you enjoy ends justify the means mc this will float your boat.

I give a 2 cause for me its in the bottom 40% of the site. It couldn't hold my attention because it blatantly ignores the interesting aspects of ASOIF. I mean when you are a huge dragon you can do whatever you want. It makes it all just pointless.

Nothing bad. Nothing great either. Just a turn brain off light read. In my case listen with tts. One thing that just really pissed me off is the dude punches another man then says hes not going to start anything like he is a victim. Like you can't just hit someone and pretend like they wont call the police, press charges and walk away.

i really enjoyed the first part of the novel with knives out. After that the author became a ball of nerves and lost his conviction by asking reader opinions. Now it's some weird harem novel where he collects women and companies.

I have a request. Please create a Discord Channel where you can communicate with your audience as much as both of you want. Please leave webnovel chapters for novel content only. I just want to come here and enjoy your work. Please allow me to do that and leave author/reader communication to a proper place.

I think your making the mistake of making him too powerful. It's much more fulfilling to see someone achieve things on his own rather than having a cheat to get something. I think the his cheats should make someone impossible to possible with effort. Then showing his effort.

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