Duke_of_Insanity

is there really a difference. one is slavery the other is mind rape

damn

I couldn't stand the part where she spoke with her brother, cause he would never do that stuff for one, and because its stupid to do so. I'm pretty sure I read one EXACTLY like this just without the symbiote on wattpad

you wasted a lot of chapters, atleast 4, you should have continued what you started with the first chapter. idk why you did that but it was a pointless waste of time. you should have done the death and reincarnation first other wise either dont put it in or use a flashback, don't waste multiple chapters on it. and then you show the birth and child which completely redundant.

I only read a couple chapters but I can tell you that the mc is stupid and annoying in my opinion.

I'm just not a big fan of hypnosis, its just not forme

pretty sure she focuses on women only. infact she's killed men just for gazing upon her hunt

men don't even get that excited from panties.

it was great i loved how it started but the way you went about the second chapter kinda ruined it for me atleast. can't wait for more chapters though

solo