Yoekko

This story is about the dangers of truckers around the world. I wish this was just fiction. but no, this is based on a true story. About a boy who has been hunted by trucks by a man for a majority of his life being summoned into a suspect world...

The first chapter was a good read, some of the dialogue felt a little off, but maybe it's because I'm conditioned to different styles of writing, not that it made me want to stop reading or ruined the immersion. The thought of an NPC breaking the boundaries of the code they were forced into is somewhat inspiring when you realize that we as people aren't too different. I also noticed some unanswered questions and plot points lingering in the story, so good luck finding those answers.

I usually do describe sounds with words, but for this story, I cannot emphasize the sound of a truck blaring into ones enough, words weren't enough to satisfy me when I was producing this novel, though I'll heed your advice and let the mind of the reader have more freedom instead of guiding their thoughts myself.

Joe Biden leveling his taming skills be like:

The human population hasn't grown for 100+ years? Makes me wonder about what the government of the future is up to...

I could explain how the story is charming, interesting, and well-paced, but you could also read it for yourself and experience first hand. If you have free time make sure to give it a read.

The cover of the novel looks great. I enjoy the premise of leveling in novels although I rarely do it myself, it sets a clear and decisive goal for the Mc and company to achieve.

The fight scenes in this novel in explicable and paints a vivd image in your mind. The characters are are fun to read about and experience their journey alongside them. My tiny brain is having a hard time finding criticism. I'll be using this story for reference in my current - future novels.

I like the world building so far.

The man who'll send Issac Soren to a new world, do not forget this name.