TheSonOfGod

Man, this was a guilty pleasure. I did read something similar but it pales in comparison to your piece. Keep that chapters coming. You cook well. As usual kudos and thanks for writing and publishing this. May the Force and God be with you.

nope

Everything is Ajuka's fault

Primordial*. I am the Grammar Police "Rawr"

Man is it nice to see a MC grow up and have a proper character arc. This is his maturing arc from his Severus's Obsession, Even Narcissa was better than Lily and that's saying a Lottt. She is not the Lily he knows from books who died for her son, nor is he the Severus Snape that Lily knows, this was a recipe for disaster from the beginning. Looking forward for how you are going to take things, from here. May God and the Force be with you

I am 18 in and as far as now, it seems good that he is breaking apart from his Idealized version of Lily cause that shit is not healthy. Magic tits, lmao that shit was a curveball and Pyrrha is a bit ooc but I like her antics.

Nah, he changed tunes about 18 in, so I have hopes

Thanks for writing this man. Truly a good perspective towards the mcs Its a breath of fresh air from some of the depressing ones due to their "outstanding moral fibre" May God and the Force be with you. Kudos