cane_casey

That's a great story with very fresh plot and also good conversation development. I think it is worth a try to take this to a writing contest!

It gets better now! Look forward to the next chapter!

It's a pleasure. It is indeed a good story that deserves a wider audience. The contest I'm talking about is aiming to dig out more awesome work in the following four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. If your work will exceed 60,000 words when it is finished, and you have more than 3,000 words at present, the work is qualified for submission review! I was wondering if you would like to give it a try! My email is ttringdom.com and please feel free to reach me if you want any further information.

The plot is getting more mature now, a wonderful chapter indeed! I think the conversation helps a lot in developing the whole settings of the story! Are you interested in getting your work into a writing contest?

Are you interested? I've recommended your story to the editorial committee, they found it truly potential.

I'm truly impressed by the plot development and narration of this story, It is well-crafted and captivating. The contrast between Reigan and Celine is really strong and I do want to read more!

This is a fresh story with a very inviting start. I can't wait to see the next chapter! Great narration by the way and I think the character is pretty strong.

This is a very exciting story! Very captivating plot and truly taking me into a mysterious world! The writing is fluent and I found myself addicted to reading it!

Hi! This is Tara, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your work has great potential, and I do want to invite you again to join the Contest. This contest is free entry, and we truly hope that we can see your work winning in the contest! Please reach me at ttringdom@gmail.com for further information.

Hi! This is Tara, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your work has great potential, and I do want to invite you again to join the Contest. This contest is free entry, and we truly hope that we can see your work winning in the contest! Please reach me at ttringdom@gmail.com for further information.