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Assam and cao xing got mixed up

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

the book has been good up to the 500 chapter mark. I've come across almost 20 chapters that are repeats of previous chapters and its now frustrating seeing this.

picked up whole book for $20 thank God I saved a lot of money

says written 2 webnovels, still not complete lol

arc was okay, was like one of those slow arcs in one piece that is mainly charecter development.

this book is currently off to a good start. its not super explaining or under explaining things. the writing quality is very good as I haven't really noticed anything that had to be reread for context. im hooked on wanting to see where the story leads and hope this story isn't dropped and continues as is.

to many errors with the blood demonesses name being wrong

story got pretty mid teir to low teir after 80 to 90 chapters in. I thought it was pretty strong early on, but it started to get nonsensical pretty fast and started falling apart. no clue how it got to over 700 chapters with how the plot started to fall apart severely by chapter 100.

okay it feels frustrating that things are feeling pussyfooted. like what happened to the dragon seals. wouldn't the mc get the lick of the fate bearers for killing them? the mc feels retarded at this point and his charecter development feels all over the place