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Okay the story is okay I guess but I am pretty sure the author is homophobic or something???

No romance?

:'(

An overall good story. In my opinion I hope that Citrinitas never actually gets into a relationship but if he does... I pray for him.

I read about 2 chapters before getting tired of the horrible grammar, punctuation, plot and basically everything else.

Is this dead?

please update it is so much better than a lot of other fanfics aaadAAAAA aaAAAAaaAaAAAAAaaaAaaaaaaAAAaaaaAAAAAaAAAAaAAAAaaAAAAAAa word count

will he meet Goku later on?

if you want to continue, continue if you don't, don't

for this being a first book, your doing great. i've seen books way worse than this and it actually updates. good job overall. :) your going great