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i realllllly wanted to stay, ii anted to dive into the world and power syatem that the reviews so highly praised but my god i can't stand moustache twirling villains. Or a wannabe edgy mc(not that i can hate him for it, he's literally 16) the writing is good though, description wise and style is phenomenal for this site so i applaud author for that. i might come back to it when i'm drunk. anw thanks for publishing author!
yum.. a unhealthy amount of info dump. me love (i physically cringed when i read the seizure part- if he was as broken as u say, he would have lost all logic and went for the tridents as a dud. obv he got rescued before he gets himself killed and thats how u 'show' he's as defective as he is mentally rather than tell us abt a 'seizure') anw that's my two cents on it
this is not a review, it is just blatant hate. can you describe why you didn't like it w/o the sass, mate?
i read the last paragraph and the 10 y/o actually tells his friend to take him home b4 the cops (and i repeat THE COPS) arrive. sure, we've all fled from the law enforcers once or twice when we were a decade old, it's whtvz (ik im getting way too agitated over this but i just can't fathom how no one said anything yet anw imma stop whining now)
gods i wanna was my eyeballs with detergent after reading this blasphemy
lol you should too
so good, thanks for the chp!
okay i'm dropping this. the dude literally can buy all amd whtv skills he needs? tf does he have unlimited coins or smth? meh
why is he taking it so well? does he get summoned into another world every other weekend or smth? jesus. second work of author is DEFINITELY better than this.
ik this is completed. i am actually reading this bcz of author's newer story(def recommend, masterpiece). anw dude thought he was in VR w/o putting on the headset? and he just shrugged off the fact that they know his REAL name even tho he did not give it? yeah whtvs everyday things to him ig